Monday, March 1, 2010

JAKE'S STORY

***So every morning I look through the kids backpacks and sign their planners and look at any things that need to be signed and sent back to school. Well I was looking through Jake's folder the other day and I came across this story he handed in for an assignment. It made me laugh so I wanted to put it on my blog. I thought it was very clever.


THE COOKIE

By Jake Dean

"It sure is a wonderful day today at the zoo." said Fred happily.

"It sure is." agreed Ted.

"You want to know what sounds delicious right now?" said Fred. "Cookies."

"Cookies are my most favorite food on the earth!" exclaimed Ted.

"It is not like we will ever get cookies." cried Fred

"But why?" asked Ted.

"We are only monkeys that people enjoy looking at!" exclaimed Fred.

"Today is the day we eat cookies!" yelled Ted.


"Hey mommy I want a snack." cried Billy.

"Fine I will buy you a cookie and you will be happy." commanded Mom.

" Yea I get a cookie today!" exclaimed Billy.

" Here you go Billy, here is your cookie, happy now?" asked Mom.

" Yes Mom, thank you." said Billy.

"Hey Billy want to go look at the monkeys?" asked Mom.

"Sure Mom." said Billy. At the monkey enclosure Billy dropped his cookie in the cage.

"Hey look cookie!" exclaimed Ted.

"Where?" asked Fred confused.

"Over there." said Fred.

"I call it!" yelled Fred.

"But I found it." Ted argued. Ted darted to get the cookie then Fred grabbed his tail and pulled it. "Ouch!" screamed Ted. "That really hurt."

"I have a great idea." said Ted.

"Lets split it." said Ted.

"OK." said Fred. They both ate the cookie and didn't pull anymore tails.

LOVE, LOVE his picture he chose to go with the story.
Too FUNNY :)

4 comments:

fraGer said...

That Jake is pretty clever!

Melanie Chambers said...

That is soooo funny. I think Jake must have cookie on the brain.

Natalie said...

Now that is one witty monkey boy!

Natalie said...

And that is the perfect pic!